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A few of my poems

 
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 4:25 pm    Post subject: A few of my poems Reply with quote

Hidden truth of life:

Emptiness,
Life,
A hollowed shell formed by the seeded rose of the grail.
To what end is unclear,
Farmiliarity has no meaning and love no sence.
A soft warm heart falls upon a thorney soul,
If there is nothing that can be done,
What will we do.
Carry on in the meaningless struggle,
Prissoners of our own boundaries of emotion.
Our path set in stone yet so unclear as to where it leads and where it ends.
Freedom can be reached,
But at the same time feared for the darkness that follows.
An end, it seems will always be there,
For those who wish to take it.

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2nd Chance:

Living a thousand dreams,
Dreaming a thousand lives,
Playing with the twisted truth
And unraveling the lies.
Ruining the chance that I once had,
The chance to have something good,
The chance to have all hear me,
The chance to be understood.
Breaking all the trust once gained
In a cloud of misery,
The walls of the castle that once stood,
Falls inside of me.
For every wish i ever made i have one thousand more.
To re-build my life and enhance,
To have another chance.

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A diamond heart, rests in the hands of gold,
pure love glistens in the summer light,
grey clowds may not venture near the boundaries of the warmth,
the perfect day concluded by the perfect night,
as by the hands of an angel an arrow from a bow is plucked.
no more will there be sorrow and hatred when there is a force this strong.
and no more will there be solitude,
for love sees beauty in all.

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The emptiness of the time from sunrise to sunset
forming day creates an atmosphere of sadness,
to be rejected happiness and hear the woefull tone of a lie
brings yet more of a tear to the hollow days cheek.
every clowd thats ever rained forms in the sky today
making life a less worthy prize for the pain that is sacrifised
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PostPosted: Mon Jun 18, 2007 5:43 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

Very deep poems...thanks for sharing them w/us.
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 12:24 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

yes, thankyou
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 1:59 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

[quote="Sara"]yes, thankyou[/quote]

Sorry, just wondering what you mean
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PostPosted: Wed Jun 20, 2007 6:03 pm    Post subject: Reply with quote

She probably agreed w/me when I thanked you for sharing them w/us.
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PostPosted: Thu Jun 21, 2007 8:07 am    Post subject: Reply with quote

lol, ah yes. Smile
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